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I'm so gonna be standing alone!

Journal Entry: Sat May 17, 2008, 6:34 AM
  • Mood: Steaming
  • Reading: Naruto Manga
You are the one
that should give me hope
You are the one
that should pass me the rope
for me to hanging on
from falling to the pit

But,
you don't agree with me
and my views
and my interest
You say my ideas
are like piece of shit...

You tell me it's waste of time
You let me believe
that I cannot success
You say I'm a weakling
A crybaby you know
What else can I say?

You push me to the despair
Into the range of torment
Killed my physical
Tortured me mentally
You do not know
You are hurting me

When I though of your face
I shuddered
in an awful fear...
You are fearing me,
till I think it's worse than death
Then I look at the moon

Oh it's so dim, so blur
Left no hope
You yell at me,
Like I'm a rotten apple,
Like I'm nobody
And dump me like most had...

It's life and it's thrilling
You are decreasing my strength
but you never touched my will
I'll seek for what I want
I'll proof something that you don't believe
RUSTY! BRAIN!

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~Edithore375:iconEdithore375: May 17, 2008, 6:27:45 PM
Hmm...considering the fact that your poem is full of anger, I'd take a guess. Someone who was close to you, didn't support you or have angered you in someway. Their disbelief and cynical actions may have offended you even if they didn't mean to. You might be doubtful that they'd keep cheering for you in what you like to do, but that's not true. They still care about you, I'm sure. :)

But if you think otherwise, then maybe I could help chill you out. You can talk to me about it if you'd like. Maybe I can help. ;)
~hikileyu:iconhikileyu: May 17, 2008, 7:15:11 PM
He's really close to me. He do... I know deep down he did... but at least... to everyone he can stop acting like he knows everything, speaking clearer or louder doesn't hurts.

Thanks Eddie, =) maybe, thanks for the shoulder. I'm just mulling over the events in my mind, gotta take a long thought.

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~Edithore375:iconEdithore375: May 17, 2008, 9:21:18 PM
Kay, you do that. Just relax, and ignore about that event. You just need to take it off your mind. Do something fun, like drawing, doing your hobbies, or if you're at school, put a sign that says "Call me..." on the worst teacher's back in school. :giggles: Yeah, but when I'm usually down I think about happy thoughts. Or maybe watch a few funny videos on the internet. ;)
~hikileyu:iconhikileyu: May 17, 2008, 11:29:06 PM
Oh if I'm sad or angry, I'll seek for the internet and computer, reading manga and dream of shows, the only thing that pull my thought away from reality. =) Thanks Eddie .^__^

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~Edithore375:iconEdithore375: May 18, 2008, 6:29:13 AM
No problem! Believe it! :thumbsup:

(A spoof from Naruto anime)
~hikileyu:iconhikileyu: May 19, 2008, 12:10:18 AM
hehe, naruto.. I was reading naruto...

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~Edithore375:iconEdithore375: May 19, 2008, 2:04:15 AM
Yeah, I noticed. Although I'm not a big fan of it, I still like making cartoon spoofs like that. :lol:
~hikileyu:iconhikileyu: May 20, 2008, 12:29:11 AM
hehe, I'm turning into a big fan coz of the nine tails. =D

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~Edithore375:iconEdithore375: May 20, 2008, 6:30:44 AM
Yeah...though, I never see a point to having nine tails...I mean, I think one should be enough.